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Hi chloe I love your hunting writing, you used heaps of different sentence types. It was very interesting and I you will succeed in the competition. Georgie
Hi Chloe This writing is amazing. I really like the way you put the photos on it looks like you had a lot of fun. Good job on shooting your first deer. Georgia
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Hi chloe
ReplyDeleteI love your hunting writing, you used heaps of different sentence types. It was very interesting and I you will succeed in the competition.
Georgie
Hi Chloe
ReplyDeleteThis writing is amazing. I really like the way you put the photos on it looks like you had a lot of fun. Good job on shooting your first deer.
Georgia